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First sample of my book:


The sun had fallen behind the mountains below the now charcoal sky of Emsdale.

     Little drops splattered on the cobblestone path home, as if the angels have started weeping. Emma evenly stood with her foot together before her brother's grave. Slowly, she started to recollect the memories she had with him. No one would defend me now, she thought. All her life, since their parents passed away, her brother had always looked after her. It didn't matter to him if he had to stop going to school, as long as he would soon see Emma graduate and get the highest honors, it was alright with him. Every sister would always say that their brother is the best brother anyone could have. But hers was as genuine as a heart of an angel.

     She felt the downpour on her shoulder. And because she didn't have enough money from her job, she hadn't bought anything to protect her from the drizzle. "I should go," she whispered. "Goodbye, Eryk."


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~mandeax May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful!
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~sonofthecursed May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a lot! :*
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~mandeax May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're very welcome =]!
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~sonofthecursed May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So... You would still be Maria? No name change? :)
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~mandeax May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Im not too sure, I have a character just like her i'd like to use named Fayte
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~sonofthecursed May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That's another wicked spelling :D I love it!
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~mandeax May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Then Fayte it shall be!
(I'm going out for a little bit, I'll be back within the hour!)
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~sonofthecursed May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Alright. Take care Fayte :)
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